Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 21, 2020
Teddy in the window
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I am so proud of your writing today Greta. You have really thought about the description!
ReplyDeleteHi Greta, I really like the description of your bears in the window. You have thought really carefully about the words you have used. I have seen your bears and fairy doors when I have walked past your house and they made me smile. Just remember that names need a capital letter :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could add a photo too.
ReplyDeleteHi Greta,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your writing! I think your bears look very cute in your window with their masks on!.